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A great celestial ship,
Drifting across the thoughts of dreamers,
constantly being unconsciously diluted by "reality" and it's advertised imortality

Blown across the vast seas of opportunity,
Invisible to those who deny what can be.
Forgotten by all but you and me.

The sails Darken, mimicking the earthly dreams,
Doubt,
Power and
Greed
all melting into a grotesque unnatural hue of sickening corruption,
Hiding the light of truths so no rays may reach even the most enlightened.

RAIN

Crystal dew of clarifying purity
dancing down from the heavens,
An invisible hand encouraging the ghostly vessel onward to unknown lands,
Painted by brushed-stroked fauna and glittering sands.

Faces turn skyward,
Look toward salvation!
Sing joy to freedom and the savior of us all.

Let your eyes be opened,
let the rain wash clean and watch the evil fall!

Let spring take hold again,
RAIN, Rain rain...
©2008-2010 ~darkwolf14
:icondarkwolf14:

Author's Comments

I made this piece looking at some clouds out the window while my mum was getting her hair done.
I followed a train of thought about ignorance and such and I wrote is out as you see here.
Nothing special unless you see something in it.

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:icondownz:
well done.... very good

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Thanks!
I was in an angst-ish mood that day.
Angry at the ignorent, closed-minded majority of the human race and what-not.
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